Fiction Stuff

[caraig]

Remember "Hiwon," that kind of creepy story that came from a dream I had? A few days ago I had "Hiwon's" brother. And I tried to write it down and expand on it, but unfortunately I got out of the writing mood later that day and didn't get it finished. And so this one has a pretty lame ending, kind of not knowing where to go. So please feel free to critique it, and be as brutal as you need to be. I added a title/logo to it as practice for graphics design and to see what I could make a computer-generated image do. Here is the story itself. Enjoy. Pax.

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[caraig.livejournal.com]

Hmm, a good idea. Thanks! I'll see what I can do to re-write that part and make it seamless. that was about the point where I had first started to loose steam writing it, so it probably shows! ^^