I really like this, as often happens, I'm very curious to know more about the context the snippet takes place in.

As per normal, I love your ... evocative style of writing, and the attitude of the aelfani toward the humans. I almost get the feeling you could do something similar with the Star Trek Federation trying to arrange a truce between two waring alien races.

Can't think of anything I didn't like about this to be honest, I'd just like to see more of it.


Brett